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Cory

I have never loved like this before,
Its so incredible to look at him and know...
That he is that man I want to spend the rest of my life with.
The guy that I love and loves me back.

So many times I've cried on my pillow,
Crying until I fell asleep or couldn't cry anymore,
I look back on those memories, the times I hurt so...
And I would do it all over again, to be where I am now.

He taught me to have no regrets,
Because everything leads to a purpose,
My path lead me to his heart,
And his made mine start beating again.

Its like that song,
"Sometimes I Thank God for UNANSWERED prayers",
God's plan is so much greater than mine,
And God has given me one of his greatest Angels.

I LOVE YOU CORY

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  • tlsledge
    September 6, 2007
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    Very good, straight from the heart. Good word choice. I give 3 applause.


  • Arizona Sunset
    September 4, 2007

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    I do not find this sappy, it is well versed, and stated. Love is a beautiful thing! People come into your life for a reason, a season, or a lifetime! Great!


  • cutiepie gold member
    September 4, 2007

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    Even though I'm getting grey, I still remember how it felt to be "in Love"...that wonderful warm all over feeling of being needed and cherished. Hold these feeling close and they will never leaveI hope this young man realises what a gift he is getting

  • EdibleRoses
    September 4, 2007

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    Sappy? Hardly! Love can turn the darkest day into the most blinding. It's truly beautiful. In times like this you're just like 'oops' for calling god[or whoever] an asshole in the past XD


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    September 4, 2007

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    Not sappy at all!!

    Aww..this is simply beautiful...
    Its so wonderful when life hands us a big piece of the pie..smiles
    Many blessings to you both..
    Beautiful children with love full of hope..
    Peace
    ~A~


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 27, 2007

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    Very nice. There's another song by Rascal Flatts called "One Good Love" that is similar to Unanswered Prayers. I'll go find the lyrics.

    Okay, here they are:

    One good love erases all
    the bitter tears on an empty dance hall
    All those lonely nights when he never called
    Just don’t seem so tragic after all
    With one good love

    One good love
    And daddy’s hands were strong and fair
    And momma understands because she’s been there
    And all mistakes were just because they cared so much
    With one good love

    One good love
    You bless all my memories
    You soften the fall of my tears
    And in my arms you’re more than enough
    You’re one good love

    One good love
    And born again means more than pass the plate and bow your head
    Yes, you bury what needs burying, you raise it from the dead
    The very best, you heal the brokenness, give grace to everyone
    With one good love

    I left out all the oohs and aahs and oh baby's but you get the gist. Anyway, I'm glad you and Cory are happy together. You deserve to be happy, whether you're with someone or not, but I'm glad you found him and he found you.

    Take care,

    Mark xo


  • SEA angel gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    WOW! WGCD...this is one of your best writes!!!

    Hi angel. I'm not on here much now due to outside demands offline and a bad case of writer's block. However, I do often think of you and pray a prayer your way.

    This said what a POWERFUL song: "Sometimes I Thank God for UNANSWERED prayers." I often tell others sometimes if we keep looking back grieving losing Mr. Wrong or Miss Wrong we miss seeing Mr. Right or Miss Right. I'm happy to hear that Mr. and Miss Right found each other. God Bless You Always with all that will bring you both true happiness. When two hearts beat as one the journey has just begun.

  • LovesSuicide
    January 27, 2007
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    O, not sappy, sweet and cute. If you find someone this special and fall in love, its aloud to be abnoxious and shout it from the roof tops. Let the world know. I am so happy for you. He sounds like a great guy too. Best wishes to you both.
    Love love Love


  • TornAsunder
    January 25, 2007

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    I Love It

    You are so amazing baby! I am so lucky to have met you. You are the greatest gift anyone could ever ask for. I love you Baby, Heart and Soul.


  • The White Rabbit
    January 25, 2007

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    awww so sweet!! its ok your allowed to write sappily thats the wonder of writing poetry. you can write with any emotion you want. I love that song, by the way. "Sometimes I think God for unanswered prayers" its so cute that you would live through all that and find the one you truly love. I hope everything works out wonderfully, and I bet it will. with love and giggles, the white rabbit

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