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~*~ Paradise beyond the Mountains ~*~

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Full moon's face glides
across the glassy lake,
as we watch in a tight embrace
so entranced to a point
of eruption by its spell.

From our cabin's open window,
devouring the mountain air's fragrances
numbing, teasing and tantalizing~
seeping so deeply into our minds and veins…

                                 whilst each touch and kiss presses 
                                 a new button of scintillation,
                                 drowning us in a swirling, steamy cauldron 
                                 of every imagined desire.


Shockwaves of passion
quiver our pleading pores,
taking us through a raging river
within erotica's flood.

Tides of steaming sensuality,
sucking us of consciousness~

                                   till we feel our hearts pounding together,
                                   lips burning for so much more
                                   clutching uncontrollably
                                   in our lover's maddening need
                                   for the other.


We shiver constantly
from the lightning strikes,
our fingertips charge with each caress.

           Arm in arm
           t
owards our honeymoon chariot,
           a lover's divine paradise awaits…

 
                                   as we succumb willingly
                                    to the moon's ageless
                                    powerful sway,
                                    alas its victim, deliciously engaged~
                                    lost in the haze of our flesh's luscious feast
                                    with dulcet guttural groans
                                    and squeaking bed springs
                                    blending with the scent of pine.


 

 

Author notes

I Desire had the honor of collaborating with my AP Husband~penman

~*~
Love Definition as shared by us:
Love= is more than a four letter word
for it encompasses the Mind, Body and Spirit
without discrimination.
Love is a tale told by the Heart
it gushes through veins in a language
expressed in hugs and kisses
(whether Physical or Spiritual)
that turns to a pot of gold
You only want to give away.

Communication with dedication,
form of trust a must
with understanding
not belittling but empowering
the other to see from within-Inspire
another givin'...
standing by his or her side~
Emotions try not hide
as the Mind only sees Beauty in another
Unconditional, complete~
shared without the need for words…


Pic by Thomas Kinkade

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  • Sokarjo
    February 13, 2007

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    Wow, that's beautiful! I agree with comment, below... very rich. Lovely write, the two writer's blend well together. Good luck in the contest! This is lovely...


    • penman gold member
      February 13, 2007
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      Thank you. You are so kind with your comments.


  • Poetry and I Inc
    February 9, 2007

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    Rich!!!!!!!

    Rich w/ metaphors and vivid descriptions. Has much passion and is well penned. Gr8 job and good luck in the contest. -theQueen"


  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    January 27, 2007
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    daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn. This is really, really, REALLY good. I don't know what else to say...you never run out of awesome poetry, yet I seem to only have a limited amount of things to say of the "I'm-in-awe"
    persuasion >_<
    ...if you catch my drift.

    Keep writing and such...I don't need to babble on any more.

    MORSMORDRE!
    - The Dark Lady


    • penman gold member
      January 27, 2007
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      Wow, what a great comment. Thank you so much from both of us.


  • soulfultia gold member
    January 25, 2007

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    Very Good

    Excellent work, love Thomas Kinkade, his pictures alone pull you into another dimention...your words help us get there a smidge quicker ~Tia


    • penman gold member
      January 25, 2007
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      Thank you for the really nice comment. This was a very fun collaboration for both of us.


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 25, 2007

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    SUCH A BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET POEM!

    Mr. Kinkaids picture always take me into my dream world, You have expressed such beautiful and touching thoughts that go beautifully with the picture.


    • penman gold member
      January 25, 2007
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      Thank you so much for the kind words. His pictures are always so special.

  • dillpickle62
    January 25, 2007
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    Just woke up in your picture

    Oh wow! A reflection of where I sit I see! Except for the red tree behind me. Beautiful!
    eww..."pleading pores" and "raging river" ahhh..."lightning strikes" "Flesh's luscious feast" what an image! Oh wow! that last line Great! Really Great!


    • penman gold member
      January 25, 2007
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      What a great comment! Thank you so much for being so kind in your remarks.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 25, 2007

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    Beautifully written, you two! sigh...
    Loved this so much! Wish you all the best in the contest! Bravo and kudos!


    • penman gold member
      January 25, 2007
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      Awww. Gee. You're always so great with your wonderful comments.


  • penman gold member
    January 24, 2007
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    Oh so precious and on fire

    This looks incredible darling. I'm so proud of it and how you posted it.

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