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So Alone

I don't want to be alone anymore.

My life seems inattentive and meek.
I can't explain it though.

All I know is that I want somebody
to hold, to care for, and maybe
even love.

So why is so hard.

I choke on tears every night,
because of this pain.

It reeks within me.

It hurts more than I can
even describe.

I'm a good person, a nice guy.
So why is it that I seem to get
discarded every time I try.

It's a burden that I can't continue
to carry.

The weight will burry me, for the
sorrow is to much.

So alone.

Why do I have to be so alone?

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ThornsoftheRose

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  • AsTheWorldEnds07
    January 25, 2007
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    good job...but stop bein so sad!! lol...i can relate to the feeling also....


  • Aeonna
    January 24, 2007

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    wow

    i can totally relate to this poem, something i feel everyday... awesome write


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