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[ the leafs slowly begin to dance ]

the leafs slowly begin to dance
She sits twisting her hair inbetween her fingers
Tears were running down her face
All because of him
He made her to it
cause he  made her sad
So sad that she had to do it
To make it stop
To make this stop



But after that was said and done
She opened her eyes
looking around she look beside her
There was the boy
That loved her but never told a soul
Now that she thinks about it
Why did she ever love a heartless fool
When there was her true love
Staring her in the eyes
With his brown eyes full of love

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  • HoldMe
    January 27, 2007

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    hey sissy, this is just totally awesome and I don't know what to say except that this totally rocks and i love it! i love the ending too definitely awesome. anyways, i gues si'll talk to ya later!