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Go Away. You're too Normal for Me.

I do not love you
You're just a friend
I cannot love you
This is the end

I do not love you
You are not for me
I hope you get it
I must truly be free

I do not love you
I cannot tell a lie
I do not wish offend
Saying so would make me die

I do not love you
Hard as that may be
Accept it and move on
You are too old for me

I do not love you
You aren't very much fun
I hope I'm not hurting you
But now my song is done




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yeah, i need title ideas

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  • earthstar
    March 15, 2007
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    Very Good

    I like how you said it what you wanted and why with respect of your freindship. I like your title go way Your too normal for me it draws the reader into the write. We are cheering for you. Feeling a little sad for this fellow. Great job it done very well


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    March 7, 2007

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    Friendship makes the best kind of love. Age is just a number. However, one must feel chemistry regardless of those preceeding facts for a relationship will be doomed from the get go. No matter who this person is, hopefully he will understand that you're trying not to hurt him and he will move on. I'm glad yo know who and what you want in a relationship as many struggle trying to find themselves. Wish you well sweetie in finding that right person.

    Ted E


    • princessarya
      March 7, 2007
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      thank you. it's more than his age or mine. he's more well-rounded and mature than i am, and morw intelligent. i also don't have much in common with him. he's a nice guy, just not the guy for me. thanks for being such a good friend


      • Ted E Bare gold member
        March 7, 2007
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        You would know better than anyone if he's the right guy or not. Only if other people would learn to know what they want the divorce rate could come down. I am also in those statistics, that's why I want the next time to be my last one