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Okay, marry me!


You’re the one through all these years
That has been here by my side
You turn me on night and day
There’s nothing we have to hide

I care not that the world does see

All the static in our life
Because my dear the time has come
That I become your wife

Although you surf and click and hide
I can always count on you
Except for when your battery dies
And I’m stuck on channel two

Remember back in 94
When the blackout had us down?
You still sat on top of me
And I wore you like a crown

So come on hun and marry me
Together we will be whole
We’ll have 3 kids and name them
TV, Remote and Control







 

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  • blondone
    April 5, 2007

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    You've been Hood-Winked by the Poectic Bandits

    Awe this is so cute I think its hard to pull a flow off in the funnies you've done a wonderful job here, a picture perfect image...


    • FifthDove
      April 5, 2007
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      This is so nice of you and your group, what a great idea Thank you so very muchDove


  • -Ink Artist-
    April 5, 2007

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    You've been Hood-winked Again!!!

    Dear one, you have a knack for bringing humor to your pieces, that's for sure! This is great! Your comparison is excellent and the whole concept for this write is unique and original. Never a dull read from you!


    ~Lori

    • FifthDove
      April 5, 2007
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      Hood winked huh lol
      This is cool and has “made my day”!!!
      Thank you so very much for this, I really appreciate it and it has lifted my spirits
      Dove*


  • individuality gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    hehehe and adopt one called video a fun poem here -spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • victoria Secret
    January 27, 2007
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    Lmfao! Totally awsome. Never would I of thought this. You've done extremely well. <-T0RI->


  • Melodies
    January 26, 2007

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    So funny!

    What a clever poem, Dove! Love it! Yep! We do have a strong attachment to our tubes.


  • RedAquarius
    January 25, 2007
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    LOL, delightful and fun! Thanks for the laugh, I sorely needed it today! Good luck in contest!


  • DJ Harley silver member
    January 25, 2007

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    oh dove that is so cute, i think most guy already have married there remotes, the way they walk around and hog them from the family *giggles* I like this poem it was so very kool.

    John


    • FifthDove
      January 25, 2007
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      Hey, thanks a lot John, I don't kknow what it is about a man and his clicker, but there is something...
      lol

  • Warrior7
    January 25, 2007

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    LMAO

    omg i had no idea where this poem was going to lead but i knew it was going to have a brilliant ending and that it did. Shit i laughed for ages.


    • FifthDove
      January 25, 2007
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      Thank you kiddo, I always appreciate your comments


  • ma belle
    January 24, 2007

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    ha ha! This really cracked me up! hehehe
    Sounds like a lovely Valentine verse to give hubby. All my best, our precious Dove. ♥ Your sis, Belle


  • queen Moderators member
    January 24, 2007
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    Very cute poem


  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    January 24, 2007

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    HAHAHA! Love the kid names! Funny and goofy proposal - I like it! Thank you so much for entering! Write on! Kimberly G.


  • Kari gold member
    January 24, 2007

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    I'll marry you if you promise FIRST to give me a million dollars, a nice car, and never wake up on the wrong side of the bed
    Good luck in the contest

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