In a wood's jungle,
there it was
Such magnificent creature
Filled with joy and hype
of it's mother nature
tracing over the trees
Embodied life within the trees
hoping around the jungle
showing the magnificence of nature
a beautiful scene it was
showing off god's work in hype
The beauty of a creature
Enjoyable life for a creature
who feeds on the trees
turning his life into hype
all within his life's jungle
Happy and satisfied it was
Scrambling around the nature
Motioning mother nature
always satisfies this creature
Tormenting the plants it was
eating the fruits of those trees
happily playing in the jungle
touristing the lands in hype
Showing off more hype
for the sake of nature
to save a jungle
from a deviant creature
who burns the trees
enjoying it he was
mourning over the loss he was
after firing the land in hype
of paper made from trees
for his sake ruining mother nature
Tormenting the life of a creature
who his home is that jungle
A jungle it was
until ruined by a creature's hype
to invest in nature's trees
Author notes
This is my first Sestina ever ^-^ it was rather complicated but I managed to figure it out =D I know it's a boring poem but oh well
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like it
Hey baby, You've been very quiet. I like this poem. I think it is beautiful. I love how you repeat the word hype in every stanza. Well done hubby!
xXx
wifey
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wow, this was such a great read!!! i loved your great thoughts of wisdoms that convey your most inner thoughts of reasoning. For a first Sestina, this is quite masterful and in every way!!! Loved all the expressions and the stanzas that carried them!!!!!
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this is fantastic!!!! well done and with such interplay of thought,,, I like the way you wove it and it definately not boring,, u added life to it and it truly came alive with "hype"
~*Starr*~ XXXXX
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i didnt realize it was a sestina at first but i do like it very much! its not boring lol
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