Looking into your eyes
Is like looking into the sky
Never fearing anything, not even when I die
Looking into your eyes
Makes me feel free as a bird
Enjoying the silence...not even a word
Looking into your eyes
Brings about a certain kind of chill
The one that gives you an instant thrill
Looking into your eyes
Is like a fresh wind
Holding and caress'n my soft brown skin
Looking into your eyes
Is like looking at me
The way you make me feel
Is exactly where I want to be
Looking into your eyes
Everlasting love...
Perky, yet innocent like a white dove
Looking into your eyes
When we start to make love
Enjoying the foreplay...
all the touching...all the hugs
Looking into your eyes
While you lay me down on tha bed
All sorts of things...
running thru my head
Looking into your eyes
while your fingers...run thru my hair
Standing here naked....bare....
Looking into your eyes
Both of us with a smile
Hating for this to end
In just a little while
Looking into your eyes
while you look down at me
Enjoying each other's company
feeling free to be....
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Love Me Tender~ by -Ink Artist-.
525 points, ended February 16, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What would you say to someone you're head over heels for? by LoStAnGeL1125.
312 points, ended March 26, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MOST IMPROVED POET! ANYTHING~ EVERYTHING by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The structure of improvement you have achieved between the two writes is great! clearly you are on the path to becoming a Master poet! Nice job! Thanks for entering the contest ~ best of luck to you!
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Lovely write! The feelings transpire in a way the everyone can relate to. This is a very emotive and endearing piece. The artwork in your presentation is beautiful, also! Thanks for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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