A zip A zap A zoodle
A blue a green and a red noodle
Use your imagination its your canvas to doodle
See anything and everything that doesn't exist
But make it poka-dot or any color! Make it twist!
A Rhinoserhippo a Flamingasaures rex
make them different make them wild
Anything can happen in the mind of a child
Author notes
I'd Like to be your brother!
A contest entry
- FAMILY FOR BLESSEDANGEL by JoyfulWriter.
450 points, ended February 12, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your prewrites!!!!! by Nereida Nightshade.
450 points, ended February 19, 2007, 101 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow this is a very happy and cheerful poem. Its so sweet it reminds me of my own childhood. Thanks for entering this fun carefree poem! Best of luck!
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I like this a lot. Refreshing.
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This is so adorable! I enjoyed this so much! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck! Smiles, Terry
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Josh your imagination is amazing. I love this. It's cuuute.
Love ya. 
<3 Cat
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wow. this is amazing. ur brilliant!!!! lol. it made me feel like a kid with crayons agn.
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am trying to read it to my 3 year old...but i keep laughing...thanks for making me child like again
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GREAT JOB JOSH!!!
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This is very interesting, it kinda reminds me of something by Syd Barrett, a song called "effervescing elephant". You've got a good lyrical flow going on, i liked it very much. Good work.
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Woo hoo!
Ooh, I like this! It's a really satisfying read, and it gets you energetic and hyper... or at least, it does to me. So, yeah! I likke it!!!
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