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[ Lay me down gently ]

Lay me down gently
Everything is to fast for this sadness
If you move me

I will break

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  • -Ink Artist-
    February 13, 2007
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    Beautiful short work. Emotive and compelling. Thanks for your entry and good luck!

    ~Lori


  • ashleyheartsyou
    January 24, 2007

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    awww baby. this is really good mai, this is impressive because you say so much in so few words and i can totally relate. i love you baby.