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The Hopeful Child

Das hoffnungsvolle Kind
Still looks to the stars
Knowing there is something more
Das hoffnungsvolle Kind
Still prays to an invisible man
Even though she can't understand his ways
Das hoffnungsvolle Kind
Still believes that tommorrow will come
Though night after night she takes another hit
Das hoffnungsvolle Kind
Still makes an appearence during the day
But dies in the twilight's fading joy

Author notes

Das hoffnungsvolle Kind means the hopeful child in german.

This is the first I've done in a while so I don't really care for it. I may redo it later.

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