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~~Loving Wishes~~

I’m sending loving wishes to you
So catch them when they come
They will make your heart shine
They will make a smile upon your face
They will make your eyes sparkle
They will make your palms sweat
They will make your knees stronger
They will make your mouth fuller
And you’ll bite your tongue to save your lips
And you’ll know who they’re from
But I have to tell you this
I don’t have any magic wand
I don’t live in fairy land
No magic is needed to say
Have a wonderful night
I am just your sunshine angel
Appearing in human form
Never goes to sleep
Always watching in your dreams
Just know that when you wake
And you are safe and well
When the wind blow by softly
You’ll feel my angels kiss
My eyes reaching into your soul
With a lovable smile upon my lips
The words right out of my mouth
Comes the purest grace
So sleep now while you can
Dream of bliss and happiness
But also remember
You’re very special
I’ll come straight to your rescue
You receive some special love
For your name is written down
In my hearts big address book
If you come and view
I give you a wink
And to tell you

I

    Love
   
          You

                So




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  • melphleg gold member
    June 15

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    Such a beautiful love poem, Grace. To me it reads as words from you for you are "Angel Grace." Yet, I understand that this is a fantasy or fairy tale poem. Well done. It flows with feelings. Makes me wish the words for meant for me.

  • thenorthernstar
    August 11, 2008
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    awe thats sweet congrades your a finslist

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 14, 2008
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    Thank You

    Thank you for entering this into the contest for me, it is truly beautiful and uplifting

    Karen


  • quack silver member
    January 13, 2008
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    this is really nice thanks for entering and good luck


  • HeavenScent4U
    January 13, 2008

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    although this is very nice and heartfelt and full of love, we were looking for something more geared towards Karen herself. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed


  • Snow White Sorrow
    December 24, 2007

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    Wow...this is a great write. It shows a lot of happiness and kindness, and some lovely imagery. Thanks for entering
    (you also need to put your screen name in your author notes)


  • katscradle
    September 16, 2007

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    write to me

    since brothers and sisters do not need to enter you can ciontact mew at my page instead of coming here i can add you to my ever growing family list now


  • katscradle
    September 7, 2007
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    ,y goodness you sure entered this poem into a lot of contests

    i acceot you as my sister thanky ou


  • Mujina
    August 12, 2007
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    So powerful and heart felt, this poem hit me in the heart. Thank you and good luck.


  • Kindredblood
    August 12, 2007

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    Such a powerfully written from within a loving heart, cool poem, so many here are full of caring,beautifully written and wonderful to read.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 8, 2007

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    Awww this is so beautiful it bought a smile to my heart . Thank you for entering and I would be honored to have you as a sister.


  • Tercil gold member
    August 3, 2007
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    A custodian chain of events here in caring, the ever watchful eye with its godly creation examples what it observes and give much in return as this love implies. My guess is that, this has won trophies for its modesty as well, and it seems if death were a reason to part, there woul be much to detail in as much as the bond is present.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 30, 2007

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    Thank you nice to see someone sending me love! I need more of that to be hoenst" Wonerfully written with much heart. Thanks oncemore and will keep you updated on these positions!

  • Improv Machinery
    July 30, 2007
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    i really really really love this poem. it struck me so deeply that i was very much speechless for about 10 minutes after i read it. i love it when a poem does that to me. you are an amazing writer, never stop. thanks for entering my contest and best of luck.
    Rob


  • LadyLeviathan silver member
    July 26, 2007
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    Please do me the honor of being my AP Sister!


  • in silver script
    July 25, 2007
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    Wow, this is beautiful and so amazing....Thank you for entering my contest.


  • LunaAmara
    July 23, 2007

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    this is beautiful--and the image also helped
    it's good to know there is someone that loving out there
    thank you and good luck in my contest


  • LadyLeviathan silver member
    July 22, 2007
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    bautiful write! i loved it. it was cute!


  • faded dreams
    June 12, 2007
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    Very pretty and sweet. Friendship at it's purest. Best wishes in my contest.


  • SeaWithYourHeart
    June 12, 2007
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    "I’ll come straight to your rescue
    You receive some special love
    For your name is written down
    In my hearts big address book"

    This is a beautiful poem and I espacially love this description of the hearts written address book.
    very well written.
    Good luck in the competition:

  • Aurora Ceres
    May 16, 2007
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    Beautiful, thank you so much for entering!


  • Tomorrows Window
    May 16, 2007

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    Bautiful. It was inspiring and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing! I'd be happy to be your sis!!!!

    ~Love Kara


  • Heavens Child
    May 15, 2007

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    A beautiful poem, that warms the heart and can't help but leave a smile on one's face... thank you for the entry.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 13, 2007

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    Beautiful words and awesome picture. It really goes so well with your write. Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • earthstar
    May 11, 2007

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    This is so lovely a softy flow of words. Thats creates smiles. I love reading this write. Your images are great this is a special poem full of love and care.


  • Blue Rew silver member
    May 11, 2007

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    sweet sentiment here and a very solid flow. The voice speaks softly and the words fall lightly as if upon a pillow. Blue


  • ItalianGurrl
    April 23, 2007
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    awww this is so sweet. i really enjoyed it. i had a smile on my face the entire time!!!! i love the ending too, it was perfecto! oh, and i think that is one of the coolest pictures ive ever seen lol

    great job!
    -rachel

    p.s. if you havent already, dont forget to fill out the form from the contest page and put it on my authors page


  • Poetic-Goddess
    April 14, 2007
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    Awww this so cute
    Thanks for entering


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    April 11, 2007
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    amazing!!

  • OurxBeginning
    March 30, 2007

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    Awww, this is really sweet and cute. I can relate to some of this and that makes me smile. This all just flowed nicely as one, and sister it is. =] Thank you for entering and good luck. ~~


  • Pixie Girl
    March 23, 2007

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    this is great!...i think you have a wonderful talent!....i like the way you wrappd it up....and feel free to join my group "the AP family of the century not the milenium because none of us will live that long"... i loved the way you expressed family love and love in general, but be sure to put what option you picked in your notes...or i'll have to dq you and i don't want to do that


  • travis34dietC
    March 23, 2007

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    very well written and sweet
    thanks so much for entering and good luck!
    could you message me so i know who you are and can add you as a sis?

  • Foreverstars
    March 22, 2007

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    Wow, you did a great poem for family. I see why it won awards. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • Lyre-Bird-
    March 10, 2007
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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering my family contest!!!!!

    WOW What a beautiful poem, and can see why this got gold.....
    so heartwarming, lifts the soul with your flow of touching, caring expressions

    what a wonderful sis you would make
    goodluck
    Tracey


  • Ronda loves elvis
    March 8, 2007
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    excellent poem and good luck in the contest !!!!

  • Heavenly Star
    March 8, 2007
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    What a great poem, I love it good luck in my contest


  • Jeneralix
    March 7, 2007

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    Your wish has been granted, sis! I love this poem!! It's so cute and sweet. Good luck in my contest!
    <3 Jenerali
    P.S. message me so I know who you are so I can add you into my family!


  • Violaceous Rainbow
    February 28, 2007

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    this is a good poem...it's usually not my cup of tea, but overall I liked it. God luck and good day.


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    February 23, 2007
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    Well Done

    i realy like this it touched my heart you did a realwell job keep it up.

    My favorite lines were

    For your name is written down
    In my hearts big address book


    very nice imagery there

    good luck in my contest


  • Through Your Iris
    February 20, 2007
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    touching

    This is a beautiful, touching piece. The love and compassion just is all over the place here and it is almost slightly comical in a sense. I like the structure change at the end to emphasize, great job!

  • in-the-twilight
    February 18, 2007

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    This is so great... I loved the write a lot! It's such a beautiful poem! Good luck in the contest! Rock on! xoxo Meg


  • honey bear
    February 16, 2007
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    ooh i am just so so happy that i do not have to pick a winner from these wonderfull writes


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 15, 2007
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    This is a beautiful show of love for a wonderful person. Thanks, and good luck.

  • honey bear
    February 14, 2007

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    this is a very lovely write,great imigary too, good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this with us


  • Trixie08
    February 14, 2007
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    I'm glad I did.

    This is amazing and I loved how your words and lines just flowed over the page this is truly one of the best I've read, no lie! I loved it and words can't alone describe how much this one means alot to me. Masterful write and Best of Luck.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 2, 2007

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    What a sweet and loving poem! I love the format that you used in this. Your work is very heartfelt. Keep up the wonderful work here!


    Jeremy0826


  • Twinstar
    January 26, 2007

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    what a sweet inspiring, loving poem you have penned here Grace. A wonderful piece. Comforting and uplifting.
    Love & Light
    Debbera


  • wings of an angel
    January 25, 2007
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    This is a lovely poem that you have penned here well done dear poet good luck in my contest

  • Chief Callahan
    January 24, 2007

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    Wonderful

    This is another tender message of your heart's devotion of love. To know that you have love like this to give is a beautiful thing and also encouraging to the rest of us men to know that their are women who have a special love to give without wanting material things or anything like that in return. Grace this words I know are you heart and soul. When I read this I hear your sincerity and I know that your words are real. Great job Grace


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    January 24, 2007

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    This is a very special poem.. There is such feeling of warmth and something special within it. I love reading your poetry and feel such a special soul behond it. Keep up the amazing work

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