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In To You

Carnal thoughts conspire,


tonight you are mine


Hold me close and feel,


the warmth of my desire


deep within passion erupts


move with me;entwine as one


Electricifing;


breathless gasps and sighs


blazing, intense eyes


rapturously indulged in mine


in a moment of ecstasy,


as I take you soaring


beyond

 

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  • medicalpoet
    January 24, 2007

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    Very Sexy!

    wow... i loved that! i got turned on just by reading that.... great work!!! loved every word... would not change a thing!!!!!!!


    • mypassion
      January 25, 2007
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      thank you "medicalpoet" for stopping on by and taking a peek. God bless, Brenda


  • Endeavor gold member
    January 24, 2007
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    Excellent

    Wonderfull tempting words

    Love the flow and feel of these words

    Truly amazing

    Rick


    • mypassion
      January 25, 2007
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      thank you Rick, Like I said you are my biggest fan..

      Hugs and kisses, me


  • Shakes-spear
    January 24, 2007

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    Isn't love grand

    Your words are so true and I wish everyone gets a chance to feel this way about someone in thier lives. When you love someone compleatly, you want to experence everything with them. Sharing your life with someone is the greatest gift one can give. I enjoy your works a lot.(even if you are my Sister) Love you lots, Bubba

    • mypassion
      January 25, 2007
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      Bubba you are awesome..(even though brothers aren't suppose to think like that..) and yes LOVE is a fabulous thing to share with the right person..I just wish he would knock on my door already..*GRIN*

      luv u lots,

      sis

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