Dead Dreams
Let me die in peace tonight
Let me fly with angels high
On the floor a bloody sight
Tears run freely as I cry
An uncaring wench is all I am
Always wanting more than that
From my lover’s arms I ran
Laughing, giggling, a selfish brat
For this act I will sorely pay my dues
Give up on love and live alone
I cannot bear another heart to bruise
Never a place to call my home
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feeling crappy last night...
Please tell me what you think
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Sorry
Ang if you need to talk you have plenty people waiting to talk to you. me included
I'm in the same boat.
I hope your heart isn't too broken.
But honestly did you expect it all to be sunshine and roses? You knew things between you and K ended for a reason... why did you think things would change?
I hope you can still repair the damage to the relationship you left behind if that is still possible?
I know my opinion count for nought but you are a really special woman and i hope you do find the love and happiness you deserve. that is all i have ever wished for you.
I relate to this poem so completely
this last stanza is exactly how i feel:
For this act I will sorely pay my dues
Give up on love and live alone
I cannot bear another heart to bruise
Never a place to call my home
Well done
xXx
phed
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wow
Once I started reading your stuff I wanted to read more. I'm glad I did. This poem is damn good! An incredible write and excellently penned. If this is an actual event, would the lover you left take you back? It would be worth a try.
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You will always have a home
Ang Im sorry you feel so bad, I scared you and Im sorry for that. You are worth loving no matter how you feel. you mean the world to me
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thank you my dear Captain
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Dont ever forget it, you are an awesome beautiful woman and you deserve the best life has to offer
Your Captain forever
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