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Push

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I again approach a familiar gate.
All this time it has blocked my way,
Hinges grown rusty.

I oil the hinges with hope,
And push with determination...


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  • janejainejayne gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    Just Knock!

    And this door will open to you! I loved this! We forget sometimes that the more we fight the more resistance we meet sometimes we just have to ask for help and it comes! Miracles still happen. Jane


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 24, 2007
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    Hope is good. She'll help ya get that sucker open.


  • transcendental baby gold member
    January 24, 2007
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    I bet you'll push your way outta there ... no rust can hold a good man down


  • Providence
    January 24, 2007
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    Sometimes the things that hold us back are our own doing, We negelect or are too busy to take care of what we need to. But wtih a little attention and a little determination...

    Excellent write!
    Marianne