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My Daddy Killed yours ova a Colour

a lil boy down the street
says you killed his daddy in his sleep,
is it true dad?
did you do that deed?

i told him he was wrong
you never would do no harm,
he said it was ova a colour.
i asked is that sumthen to really fight ova
he said not to you or me,
but obviously that is how our family thinks,
see yours has a different colour to mine
and so we have to stay on own line
if they new i was talken to you
i would get mine.

so come at night and we talk
but if they knew...we would have a fight
the lil boy said dont hate ur dad coz i dont
he did wat he felt was respectin his own.
yeah i miss my daddy
but all the fighten ova a colour
I dont miss that no more
so if nuthen else
please learn a lesson;
a colour is no reason to kill or be killed,
no reason to walk the streets.
all it is...is sumthen outa a crayon box
so go home and colour a picture
wit every crayon u got
then put it in a envelope
and put daddy's number on top.
they should let him have it,
make sure no stickers just a stamp,
maybe then he will see
that a colour isnt how it has to be.

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  • panegyric ink
    January 29, 2007
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    Love This!!!

    wow, wow, wow, wow!!!!! Now this is definitely a well written piece of poetry!!!!!


  • xoextrav0ganzaox
    January 28, 2007
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    Excellent

    You are an Excellent writer keep up the good work