Ah child! These mesmerizing dreams capture my heart
So as they capture your mind
Flights of fancy yet lighter than breath stream from your lips
And cloud the air like a frosty winter day
So much like the wind, you are freed from time
Eternity and possibility embrace you like a brother
For they will give you anything, if only you dare to ask
And ask you do- time and time again
Ah child, so even to know you
I know the dreams of the world
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A contest entry
- What you feel # 21 by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended January 24, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Please enter, i'm making a baby book of poems!!! by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended May 21, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
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Please tell me what you think
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Breath-takingly beautiful.. A treasure to read!Thanks for entering & best of luck
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There are quite some emotions attached to the words of this poem here. Beautiful piece this is
Thanks for yet another entry
Leander -
Very lovely indeed. This just has so much emotion behind it. It's very simple in words yet the way the words are placed together make this a wonderful little master piece. Well done.
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A thought worth realizing.
My favorite lines:
Eternity and possibility embrace you like a brother
For they will give you anything, if only you dare to ask
And ask you do- time and time again
Seeing a reflection, a remembrance sitting in the realms of the moment.
Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing my friend.
~VIRGOAN~
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Very well done. This is really touching and the visual of it powerful. Good luck.
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This is simply beautiful. Such an enchanting and lovely piece of prose. Penned with sincerity and flair. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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