Falling like rain
Comes rivers of blood
Hear it again
The rush
Run for your lives
Cry out to the skies
And we pay for our ancestor’s lies
Chaos
Black like the sky
Red like the earth
Those who will die
Know rebirth
Shed blood onto me
I weep onto thee
Marked for redemption, we
Lost
The last embrace
A passionate kiss
An angel’s face
Nothing equals this
Up until never
Bound firmly together
Our last touch shall last forever
Chaos
Black like the sky
Red like the earth
Those who will die
Know rebirth
You in me
Me in you
Nothing more real
Nothing more true
Skin on blood
Blood on lips
Lips on another
Come to this
Pheonix rises
Pheonix falls
Ashes to ashes
Encompasses us all
One last breath
Bursts out to two souls
One more time
Leaves empty shells
Lost
Black like the sky
Red like the earth
Those who will die
Know rebirth
And ever we live
And ever we die
I’ll see you again
I feel inside
Chaos
Black like the sky
Red like the earth
Rising away from the ruins of earth
Spirit entwined
Soulmates again
Those who will die know rebirth
Lost
Author notes
Song for my band. Mine!
Oooh. If you crit me, I will love you forever and ever.
And yeah... Angst. I know. And cheesy, I know.
I need to know if it sucks! =/
Maybe I'm a bit obsessed with Armageddon for someone who isn't even religious. ^^;
Comments
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It made me stop and think. That is something that really makes for a fantastic read. To slow down, and enjoy something fresh and vivid.there is no doubt you are in control of your pen and know just where to take us. Great piece!
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Yes, this flows. Your note values are coherent and alligning. Your words speak truths both on the surface and within the thoughts.
Everyones idea of armageddon is different and one needs no religious basis for which to think of a world ending. We each as persons breathing this earth must discover our own inner balance before we can reach out to those around us.
~*Starr*~ xx
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thankyou ^^
And that's a beautiful philosophy. =)
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Ooo, pretty!
I like it. It's creative, it flows well, and sure- you might be a little obsessed- but you won't get far without a few things to focus on!
Particularly enjoyed these lines:
"Black like the sky
Red like the earth
Those who will die
Know rebirth"
For some reason, those last two are just sticking with me, and I love that. I'll ponder these tonight, loves...
-Allura
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