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I see



Another familiar face, found in a day of life.
Memories begin to lapse, unanswered questions suffice.

Would you remember who I was to you?
And if you would, what would you do?

Would you talk to me, catch me up on your days?
Or turn the other cheek, and send me on my ways?

Are you an image, of qualities far from reality?
Qualities I yearn for, too good for normality?




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  • Locke
    January 27, 2007

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    Different

    Is this about your old best friend's sister??

    I think it's probably the shortest thing you've ever written. Which is weird, you know, cuz you usually write these really long drawn out poems. Nice change of pace.

    Have you ever thought about changing your rhyme scheme a bit? You usually use an a-b-a or an a-a. It works for you, but I was just wondering if you ever thought about veering a little.

    Not that you should if you don't want to. I never really change my style either.