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We Don't Care

 

So many struggles to face,
Just to hold you.
My love burns eternaly,
Yet we must hide are passionate ways.

They all call us names,
Tell us our love is wrong.
Yet we hold on to eachother,
Fight to move on.


My mother is against it,
Telling me it's disgusting.
She doesn't know because she can't accept,
This is who I have to be.


When did love become wrong,
When did it take a shape, a form.
When did love become a sin,
How can they tell us how to live?


A woman can love a woman,
And a man another man.
Let them judge, just let them stare,
They can never hurt if we refuse to care!

Author notes

I chose:

write me a dark poem, things you had to go through as a gay/lez person... list the troubles you had to face... and give one that you believe was the most painful.

this is about how people judged and condemned me and my girlfriend to the point were we stopped going to school........it was a hard thing but we decided to say fuck what they think!

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  • wish you loved me
    March 5, 2008
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    wow... this is amazing... great job,,,,, i can relate!
    ~jen


  • choaticrose
    February 17, 2007

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    "When did love become wrong,
    When did it take a shape, a form.
    When did love become a sin,
    How can they tell us how to live?

    A woman can love a woman,
    And a man another man.
    Let them judge, just let them stare,
    They can never hurt if we refuse to care"

    My favorite two stanzas. They are too true. I loved this poem, and these two stanzas the most.
    Great write.
    Best wishes,
    ~Choaticrose


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    January 24, 2007

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    Great Write Babe!

    Hey baby! I love this write! It's beautiful. The flows was great and smooth. Your words were powerful and full of love and emotion...great write! I loved this poem even more though because I know its about us and you know what your right we shouldn't care nor should we have to...love is love and that's all that should matter. Anywho love ya and hope ya win you defintly deserve to! Keep writting your great at it and very talented!



    ~Love always Chrissy~


  • Fallen Angel 8
    January 24, 2007
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    This is a very true poem. If you love some one then you shouldn't care what other people think about the relationship. They can put their 2cents in and you can choose to disregaurd it or take it into consideration..

    †Angel†


  • PuRfekly-Phlaw3d
    January 24, 2007
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    i LOve IT

    i love this one !!


    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2536778

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