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(inhale)

(inhale)
i have trouble with silence
but i don't fill the

gaps

with
(smokehazeparanoia)
anything - i let it
sit still still I can't
(what?)
can't fathom why these

gaps

keep growing until
(don't judge)
this gap is too great
and we sit still still
letting them grow
(exhale)

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It's my tribute to e.e. cummings.

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