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Storm

Treacherous winding
Angered mother nature
trees crack window glass

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This is my first Haiku ever, hope it's good!

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  • Phed
    January 27, 2007

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    Wow!

    perfect PERFECT!

    I knew you could do it!

    This is exactly what a haiku is! baby i'm so glad you figured it out!


  • mypassion
    January 27, 2007

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    good

    I see good ol'mother nature is at it again..
    Great imagery, very impressive for your first haiku

    Thanks for sharing,

    Brenda


  • unheardwisdom
    January 24, 2007

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    I'm not really much of one to like Haiku's but this one was nice. Good job for your first one ever. ^_^