I wonder if I can really think as poetically
as I thought I could. I
want the raw feelings of an unrequited love
to sound good, so other people will
want to read them.
Why does anyone ever
want anything?
Is it because they actually
want it,
or is it because other people
want them to
want it?
Or is it because...
I want you.
The space between us could be filled with stars,
but it will always just be
space.
Author notes
21,317 yellow road lines
between where you are
and where I am.
I am. And you are.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hey, great poem!
btw..I am Logan's friend Daniel
I figured I had time to read some poetry this morning as there is a 2 hour delay because of freezing rain!
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I see that you haven't written a poem in a while. I was thinking that you were going to blow my brains out with a hair dryer. You did just that and more with this poem. It made me think.
Why does anyone ever
want anything?
Is it because they actually
want it,
or is it because other people
want them to
want it?
Those lines are like in the top 4.5 things in a poem ever.
Keep in touch. And keep writing.
-Logan
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So please tell me Miss. Natalie Marie how you were born with such amazing talent?
I love this poem,
and not even in the faint sense of the word.
I actually LOVE it.
Its so real;
and its exactly how i pretty much feel.
(rhyming whatwhatt)
The ending ripped my heart and then sowed it back together in one motion haha.
i love you;
enter this in a contest.
<3
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ohhh that is amazing
The space between us could be filled with stars,
but it will always just be
space.
MY GOSH
i love this
<333
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