All of them have failed me
Have left me alone to die
I look so sadly up at them
Jealousy in my eyes
The people I know have changed
From love to hate
From hate to love
I must move on from those that hate
And go toward those with love
It will be hard to turn away
From friends who I've been so very close
Yet deep in my heart I know for sure
I must leave them alone
But my heart says go yet I stay
My mind says stay and I listen
What to do, what to say
To these friends who turned against me
What to do, what to say
To these friends who have learned to love me
I have yet to learn what to do
With all of these many choices
A contest entry
- Age 13 and Under ONLY ~ We are all Diamonds in the Rough by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended October 15, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A little something for everyone :F by redhanded.
1000 points, ended May 12, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hmm...
very nice piece...flows very well to the page..keep up the good work ansd best of luck in my contest...and in the future...
andi
(redhanded)
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This is good, but you can't read the font without highlighting it. You should showcase your work when you post it
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Wow
This is an amazing poem!
You have done so well to describe this problem,and that you dont know what to do..
Its really well written and full of emotion.
to have friends all of a sudden turn on you after being close is hard,But in the end it does work out..
It sad that things like this happen but it a part of growing up and there is always new friends waiting there for you,That will help you through everything and wont leave you..
Well done!
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