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Sleep Tonight

Layin' here,
wrapped up in your arms,
your touch is
[everything I want && need]

Today's been wonderful,
I don't want it to end,
and let a different day begin.
I don't wanna sleep tonight,
I don't want a single thing to change.

Face it darling
[You're My Better Half]

" I wish the sun would just forget to come up
And just leave us wrapped up in this love "

Tell me of a sweet story that's almost mine,
and I'll scream you a love song<3

Author notes

Wow.
Totally different from what I usually write.
Oh well, Tell me what you think.
<33

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  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    March 26, 2007
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    Awh. That was sweet. Keep up the greaat work.


  • AkaBaki
    February 19, 2007

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    so beautiful

    I loved it. it was gorgeous. great write. i like the last line the best. keep up the great work. hey, i'm living in south carolina too. i hate it here.
    -AkaBaki

  • bloodstaindmind
    January 25, 2007
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    apparently I have to actually write in here to even offer you 3 applauses lol love this poem <3


  • Morbidly Gorgeous
    January 24, 2007

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    =]]]]]]]]]]
    You Already Know What I Think Of Thise Babe.
    I'll scream you a love song<3
    So My Thing =]
    I Love You<333333


  • My Frozen Heart
    January 24, 2007
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    it's really beautiful! great job!


  • xX Dear Diary Xx
    January 23, 2007
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    beautiful!


    Di


  • love tank x
    January 23, 2007

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    "Face it darling
    [You're My Better Half]"

    "Tell me of a sweet story that's almost mine,
    and I'll scream you a love song<3 "

    ^^ My fave parts =]
    Awww this is so sweet! It's nice to write about this stuff once in a while
    Great job hun<3

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