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Do You Know What I Am?

...She is tantalyzing and mesmorizing,
As she glides across the stage.
Her outfit is colorful and bold--
Jumping out at you,
You enjoy it's beauty.
Although shy, this dancer
Will gracefully approach you,
but then will leap away.
Mysteriously she finishes her dance.
With a flutter of her dress,
she disappears...

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  • Death From Above
    April 4, 2008
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    Very nice. Good Luck!

  • BubblesUp
    March 1, 2008
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    Beautiful!!!


  • Ryno
    February 14, 2008

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    Beautiful imagery ... took me a second to realize what you were talking about and it connect well ... stunning, thanks for the entry.


  • Southern Darling
    November 28, 2007
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    Mysterious and yet enchanting. This poem invokes definite sensations. Very nice.


  • SolemnlySwear
    April 27, 2007
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    Obviously you are talking about a butterfly. But what stage is she gliding across? Good job.


    • forever-hoping
      April 27, 2007
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      The 'stage', in my mind, is an open field...and she's peforming her 'dance' for all to view...

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