I'm so confussed,
what should i do,
to bring you peace and jolly;
Christmas time is almost here,
maybe i should bring a dolly.
Above my head,
is where it sits,
where the mistletoe is at,
And on our couch with your army around me,
is where we both have sat.
And becasue the mistletoe is above our head,
we should kiss today;
and hold our hearts in each others hand,
and be on our marry way.
Please tell me what you think
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good
this ones preety good also:] nice jobb
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this is really nice,
maybe you tried a little too hard to make it flow with the line "And on our couch with your army around me," army??
you need to spell check too, but the idea of the poem is beautiful and sweet
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