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Hope

Just when I thought it was over,
When my world was turning dark.
God sent me a great friend,
To light up my world with a little spark.

I was upset beyond belief,
Happiness was turning into a ghost.
My friend lent me a shoulder to cry on,
She came when I needed her most.

She came when I was falling down,
With her kind words she picked me up.
She showed me life was worth living,
And helped me to get back on top.

Although she hardly knew me,
She gave new hope to my heart.
She walked in with a bright smile,
And gave me a chance to a new start.

She came with a golden heart,
Her kindness covered me like a rope.
Although my friend wasn't a real angel,
I named her my angel of hope . . .


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  • JM Kenyon silver member
    March 23, 2007
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    Your friend sounds like an angel. Your poetry is so smooth and beautiful and saturated with feeling that it is hard to resist reading and experiencing the verses twist out emotions. Fabulous write. s an dbest wishes always... ~Genie~

  • drhemantvinze
    February 12, 2007
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    Excellent

    Truely angelic personalities do exist. Selflessly they offer a helping hand.