accompanying score: Logicus Nexus Emporius
(a words-to-melody piece...)
(oboe- words to melody)
Sleeping deep within winds
through the garden of your thoughts,
I dream of you...
As the towering billows of clouds pass by
they change...
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(harp, descending- words to melody)
...darkly, darkly, in our dreams here,
ever fading, in our dreams here,
clouded by the vapors rising
high...
(harp ascending)
(harp, piano- music as background to narrated words)
Narration:
in the sunlight...
the earth breaks ever wider...
swirling with poison air
thick with ammonia bicarbonate
fumes
coloring the sun farewell
as gasses settle
in the hollows of the faded tenements of our dreams,
monolithic towers pierce the sky
in dizzying shadowy scenes
of metaphysical gymnastic dances
with Newton on a far-off distant cloud...
(high violas- words to melody)
then, we die
die...
(low violas- words to melody)
we've come, laden heavy
with trials of a broken social path...
we breathe
breathe
breathe another breath...
(steady piano, oboes- words to melody)
astral message
see Atlantis rise
high above the waves...
(cymbals, violas- words to melody)
buttressed against columns
bracing our thoughts,
cantilevers of sanity fly
through subplots of our mind...
(oboe- words to melody)
Lechery waiting...
Libido sates
mistic ideologies sprouting from portals of mystical time
(low viola- words to melody)
opus
ballets
pirouette through the days
(bass- words to melody)
tiny feet
levitate
glassy gaze
withering
night dawns in the garden of your mind.
Author notes
music score also written by yours truly, and performed by my talented laptop...
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wh the sunlight...
the earth breaks ever wider...
swirling with poison air
thick with ammonia bicarbonate
fumes
coloring the sun farewell
as gasses settle
in the hollows of the faded tenements of our dreams,
monolithic towers pierce the sky
in dizzying shadowy scenes
of metaphysical gymnastic dances
with Newton on a far-off distant cloudat a beautiful write! this was my favorite part
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hey, thanks, glad you liked this experimantal oldie (music with words)... (makes me want to scrutinize it again... 5 stars for that!)
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Cool music - too - fits the episodic nature of poem. Daring harmonic content. Like the heartbeat near the end - all that's left on sea of consciousness - the ballerina skittering above sea level.
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YUM
Sounds more like cooking than a garden - but this is fantasy, therefore a food garden. Clever, concise way of putting it - going from leavening (awakening) to rock (past), pudding (present), to souffle (libido/desire) and finally a light levitation (future/rest). Seems almost like a tour through the specific parts of the brain. Quite an adventure. I like the ancient and Baroque images - almost Italian.
The opening of leaven and white powder seems to reference residue of drugs, but may be the brain's own ability to power up - an increase in spirit - coffee helps raise the consciousness - thanks for breakfast of thought.
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wow, way to hard for me to understand
well, i kinda get a meaning but this is just insane 
but i kinda love it! ill start to translate some words to get the deeper meaning!
thanks a lot for this ART!
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WHOA
This is way, way to deep for me to understand, but I'm sure it is a wonderful piece of poetic penning. The vocabulary is a one!
KEEP ON PENNING
POETDONTKNOWIT -
this is wayyyyy over my head. I did read it twice though. Maybe it's a generation gap thing. I am climbing the ladder of age and am reaching the farthest rung lol.
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Very impressive and intellectual poem. It's definitely one for those who have a little bit of background in science or that have a dictionary near by. However, with the poem subject, the metaphors draw really well. I also like the way you've structured the lines-- the breaking of them are suitable with the rhythm. My one complaint is that some of it may be a little above some people's comprehension, due to a lot of people not having too much of a scientific background [I know that I don't, haha]. However, beyond that, it reads well. Thank you for sharing!
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Darlin,it's more than Auntie's mind can grasp.Extravagantly ornate both in intent and words. I follow you most of the way,however.It seems akin to the Beatles "Lucy". I did however enjoy this lines voice,"ideologies sprout within portals of time spewing forth their cheesy soufflé.Opus ballets underfoot, pirouetting tiny feet lieitating above your glassy gaze." For it's humor played out in my grasp of the piece. If this came across,as anything but praise of your intellect.Please,by all means,delete me.Not my intentions atall! LOL~Suseann I haven't a clue!
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Wow
I think this is a wonderful write although I had to get a dictionary to understand some words lol.
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Very unique.. I had to read it a couple of times and with each read, picked up the flow of the music. Well done.
Soulful Woman -
wow
the word use in this piece is very powerful...great job..it really captured me..keep it up
xoxox
Courtney
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