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Memory Slips Through My Mind

memory slips through my mind
like a dagger in my flesh
which I can't help but twist
twisting my thoughts beyond comprehension
filling me with former lamentations
and failings with no excuses why
shall I not find this fatal flaw?
shall I forget myself and again repeat?
ah - let us forget this nonsense
there's little time left to reminisce.

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  • Sayyadina
    November 11, 2008

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    good work

    yes i agree- let's forget indeed i like that i can relate- we all overthink the bad or the memories where we were at fault...there's better things to keep in mind i think...


  • radical24
    January 23, 2007
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    lol

    ahhhhhh but not necessairly true...we need to reminisce in order to go forward for in the past lies promise of the future....nicely written....good questions and doubts....much enjoyed the read....best, radical