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So Sick

I知 so sick of being different,
So I pray to god above,
To give me back my normal life,
Give me a man to love.

舛us I知 sick of being labeled,
Contradicted and abused.
I知 sick of all the staring,
And I知 sick of being used.

I try to act uncaring,
Even comfortable at times.
But the voices pierce my barriers,
And amplify my crimes.

Some say that I deserve it,
For telling all the truth.
Bit that people will get over it,
I知 yet to see the proof.

An unjust accusation,
Still some say that it痴 my choice.
I try to make them understand,
Frustration dims my voice.

The constant crude reminders,
Shattered dreams and fearful eyes.
I can never be accepted,
While at night, my conscience cries.

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  • disparate
    May 7, 2007

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    It's utter crap how horrible people are. I don't understand how people can be so narrow-minded and hateful towards other people, especially just because of their sexual choices. It's a disgusting world we live in today..

    And there are far worse things a person can do than kiss someone of the opposite sex, or feel they were born as the wrong sex.

    I really liked this poem, I find rhyming hard sometimes, especially keeping it creative and worth reading, so whenever I read one that's well done, I have to let them know. And this was well done, I definitely feel what you're saying.


  • B0b
    January 23, 2007
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    Um I dont know what to say really...i like the poem but it gave me the idea that you are goin to go back into the closet...why would you do that....you said that you would stand by corey and me and we would be the gay people or watever...you cant leave us


    • isisspirit
      January 24, 2007
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      I'm not going newhere bub, i just get sick of it ya know, but I am who I am and noone can make me back down. love you, becca


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 23, 2007

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    wow this is fantastic i totally understand what you are tying to say in this poem beacsue it is unfair how we get labeled into diff catorgorys and things i really like this