I have one thing in this world,
That makes me smile,
Tears but of joy,
Happiness not pain,
My comfort in this life is one,
I close my eyes and it appears,
If my tears do fall,
I close my eyes,
Then you appear
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Very pretty, I really like the word choice and how during the really descriptive part of this piece you used so many unique words! Fantastic piece!
Keep up the good work,This one flows like a stream of light across the human heart, very colorful. -
that one love
This is such a tribute to that one love that makes all okay with the world.... even when everything else may suck.
Great job with the wording and I love the last lines.
DF40
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Very nice
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oh how sweet. happiness is but just feeling. but true joy is what is inside you, what MAKES you feel. very nice =]
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This is a dedication of love to your special person who gives you strength an wipes the tears away. Your lines vividly portray deep expresive emotions whch i feel many will be able to relate within their own lives. This is a pleasing poem to the eye and lips the flow is smooth and reads well. Thank you for the pleasure of your hearts wisdom and talent of your pen.
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Awww
This poem is soo cute and sweet..Its really well written..
And full of emotion and love..
you have done a really good job with this one..
I like the idea of closing your eyes to see this person who makes you so happy..Its cute
Well done!!
Nash
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