Oh Master of Light,
Your sunlight flood!
Crash waves of healing
'gainst coursing blood.
Golden heat fuse us,
Shaped to belong.
The angels' chorus
A rest'rative song.
A contest entry
- Rainbows and Angels by Grey Mouser.
800 points, ended February 7, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The healing light of warmth has many special powers and your short write brings us such hope. Nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser
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Strong and powerful with so few words. The healing could be delivered from this piece. Thank you for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest.
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You did an excellent job on the poem.
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Healing...
So very healing...I am actually experiencing a lot pain right now from a bank injury...and these words truly eased me and washed over me bringing relaxation. Thank you! This was an absolute pleasure to read. -
Transcends Poetry
This comforted me and I'm not even ailing. Beautiful work. Very vivacious. A wonderful sense of structure and emotion in just a few words.
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