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An Atheists Prayer

And as I slowly drift away
I seek to live another day
let my eyes open tomorrow
let joy overcome my sorrow
I know that my life is troubled
and more than once I have stumbled
and not religious as I should
I strive the path of right and good
I know in God I don't believe
but still at times your help I need
should I suffer for lack of faith
in times of pain must I still wait
must I have more than I can stand
in the dark searching for your hand
must I walk that extra mile
shall I pay that extra trial
while I may say you don't exist
at times I still sincerely wish
let your banner stand unfurled
in this cold unfeeling world
guide my path with a simple spark
don't make me wander, in the dark

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  • jjbreunig3
    January 23, 2007

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    An interesting write...

    An interesting write; with Him, it's pretty much all or nothing; maybe you would enjoy my poems "Petitions to God" and "Waiting on You". --Joe


  • Kuranya gold member
    January 23, 2007
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    I think I know how this feels as it feels like it was written about how I feel, sometimes it's hard to stay on track and when you don't feel like god is watching or helping makes you feel terribly alon.... well written

    Karen