Stuck with money
I quit school and started a job
No more college student acting like a slob
I now have money!
But I’m in debt, aint that funny
I spent to much, got a new truck
Now I’m in debt, what the fuck
Wasn’t supposed to happen like this
Seems my money is as worthless as piss
The more I make the more I spend
The debt will never end
I thought money would make me free
But it has tied me down
With my new job I’m stuck
With my money I’m fucked
Please tell me what you think
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Haha
This is too funny. I hate spending my own money, I have to find the biggest bargains and stuff. It sucks but its life so w/e
"The more I make the more I spend"
That line is so true
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lol. glad you liked it. it is life in todays society so i figured i would write it, besides that it is a story of my own life. laterz
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lol. glad you liked it. it is life in todays society so i figured i would write it, besides that it is a story of my own life. laterz
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funny
This one is funny, flows better than some of your older ones. It also very true in many ways. Your writing is definetely improving Jeremiah. Keep up the good work! -
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thanks
thanks for the comments, i actually didnt know if i liked this one very much or not, i figured i would drop it in here and see if others liked it or not. thanks for the feed back. talk at ya laterz
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Boy oh boy does this sound familiar to me, welcome to the money, once you get on, you can't get off... well written, sentiments I can totally relate to..
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thanks
thanks much for the feed back. im glad to hear some other people can relate to it. i wasnt so sure when i wrote it, but i kinda like it. your are correct once you get on it you can't easily get off. thanks
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