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Withstand

This pale written thought,
not only did it shriek,
not only did it moan,
it died along with these options.
And in death, your blood will flood the earth.

That this allie walked down with me,
held closely to my innards,
choked my veins in hope.
Just like I never had anything
to fucking die for.

I couldn't of been so alone,
with these cold hearted lingering words.
And in repetition will it dive on into,
to grab me by surprise,
just to say,
that I was alive.

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  • JonKohan
    January 23, 2007

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    great write like always, i haven't comment on here for a while so sorry about that, but i see you're still very talented, lol. like you'd loss you're talent. keep it up

    Jonny