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Climax Of Nature

Colorless dreams will become vivid

Darkness becomes light

One-time chance to see life

through eyes of the purest

Heaven rises above the clouds

trees whisper and speak

wind blows across the lavenders

all seen in imagination

golden petals slide past sight

blue skies stare down

clouds shape up high

grass shudders in joy

water struggles to the land

sliding back down from where it came

aromas of sweet peony cover senses

colors changing unimaginably fast

animals move quickly around the environment

water falls from the sky

it starts to rain

crystals fall and break from the pressure

the speed

the velocity

grasping the memory

to make it play again and again

savor the beauty

savor the sound

savor the smell

savor the taste

savor climax of nature

 

Author notes

Don't like it? Don't tell me. Not your style? Don't tell me. Don't get it? Read it again. (I don't want to have to hear bad comments from seriously racist,immature,dumb,or childish people.)

A contest entry

Note: (Not for the judge when this poem is entered) Climax: The point of greatest intensity,force,or effect of ascending series.

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  • u took my user name
    February 16, 2007

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    ok.... frankly... the author's comment worried me a little. still, i was gonna speak my mind anyway. lol

    i think you did a very nice job. a lot of really beautiful images. BUT for th contest, i think the poem should have a focus, and not so broad on the images. if you are describing these beautiful things in the environment... then i think you should focus on one particular thing.. (or a few) and make that thing magical. something breath taking

    a pleasure to read

    thank you for entering
    best wishes,
    albasoul


  • copypastedelete
    January 23, 2007
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    Wow.....It's really good....In tune with nature....the only way to fly....