One minute I'm walking the halls of my glorious school
Smiling like a damn fool
The next thing you know I'm throwing a fit
My boyfriend tries to understand,but female hormones he just cannot get
One minute I want to scream and bitch
I swear I can be a real witch
Then I'm crying over nothing at all
My poor boyfriend doesn't understand why I bawl
One minute I'm a very sweet and kind girl
Then suddenly my emotions are out of this world
I can't seem to decide
Maybe my period's finally going to arrive
Or maybe it's that damn birth control pill
All I know is these mood swings are unreal
Now, I really am trying to keep myself calm and kind
Don't ask me what's wrong with me one more time
No I'm not PMSing and my panties are just fine
When I'm like this you best walk the line
I'm not gloomy and I'm not upset
I just feel like crying today; can you handle it?
One minute the tears are falling angrily down
I swear I think I'm asylum bound
All you ladies who know how I feel
Scream and cry until you make the paint peel
One minute I'm mad about the craziest thing
Yelling and cursing until everyone's tongue-tied and their ears ring
I try so hard to keep myself under control,
but this anger I just can't seem to hold
Don't apologize for your mood swings
You're just a woman who knows what I mean
So scream,cry, and whatever else you may feel
Just remember you go to jail if you kill
A contest entry
- MOOD SWINGS by piccola.
450 points, ended January 27, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
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oh my gosh this was such an awesome poem! i just loved it! and the ending was just awesome!!! i even had to show a bunch of people and they loved it too! I swear, i read this poem like a million times! ill prolly read it again! and again! i really liked the way it all flowed and what not...sounded really good. and your word usage was also really good. cant wait to read another one of your works... good job on this amazing write, and keep up the good work!
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lol...I like it...I needed it..lol..
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Oh This was or IS great!!! Just exactly what I'm looking for. It explains the insanity of it all..the quickness of the changes..the craziness and how people do ask why we have our panties in a twist..lol. good job.
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You hit this one right on the target!
This is sooo true my dear! As a woman and mother of a 16 yr old daughter lol I can surely atest that every line was right out of my daughters mouth! She and I love the whole thing! Wonderful job!
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And being a woman we are allowed to behave any damn way we want to! lol I love this, cos its just how I feel sometimes and all men blame PMS and I doubt some of them even know what it means, god to be a man and allowed to punch someone would be so much easier! Great read.
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