Rock my vessel, make me squeal,
Nails doth scrape, skin doth peel.
Excavate my hidden treasures,
I have no map to mark my pleasures.
Hyperlink me, come inside,
Seek for me where I do hide.
Make good use of your Doggy style
And make me purr all the while.
I'll be your canvas, paint me red,
Lashing me 'til I feel dread.
Make me bleed and I'll make due
With what this poem will do to you.
Break my hips, I do not care,
Hell, rip apart my underwear,
As long as you make me scream your name
Until I never feel the same.
Flow with the motion of my ocean
And take me on with just a notion.
A sprinkle of magic, a touch of love
From below or from above.
Bring me out of this shell
Ring my bell and give me hell.
Wake me up at half past ten
And then we'll do it once again.
Rape me if the idea does fit
With or without the candles lit.
Take the wax and burn me good
Then slip into my neighborhood.
Being in a place like this is such a joy
With such a vivacious, lively boy.
Author notes
Commission #3
A contest entry
- Sensual, Erotica, Love and Happiness Contest by MYsecondchance.
700 points, ended July 9, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
And what do you have to say?
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wow this was something else in a good way.
So raw and untamed with the imagery, I bit graphic for my tastes but good non the less.
thanks for entering. -
Very nice write, very sensual and hot.
Well Done....Best wishes in the contest
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Rape me if the idea does fit
With or without the candles lit.
Take the wax and burn me good
Then slip into my neighborhood.
There is a sense toaware the senses strongly touching the story of the hearts time and time again..the flow and the pace of the write makes this poem just magicaland appealing as well..a beabutiful work is here..
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ummm damn
really really good. very kinky... my kinda woman...
really good job... you got me thinkin and umm... yeah....
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Most excellent and HOT piece! Whew! Very hot and kinky indeed! All the best to you!
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Ww this is certainly what I was not expecting, such a wonderful tale... great write you have here, definately a little hot under the collar... well done
Karen
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