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Love Is Not A Sin

The word FAMILY is defined by the American Heritage Dictionary as follows:

fam·i·ly   (fām'ə-lē, fām'lē)
n. pl. fam·i·lies

1. A fundamental social group in society typically consisting of one or two parents and their children.

2. Two or more people who share goals and values, have long-term commitments to one another, and reside usually in the same dwelling place.

3.) A group of like things; a class.

4.) A group of individuals derived from a common stock: the family of human beings.

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I see you driving around
with your man+woman=child stickers
on the bumpers of your soccer-mom minivans.
I see all your Jesus saves decals
right next to your bigotted ideologies,
and all I ask is:
Who do you think you are.

Which holy messiah died
and made you the next self-righteous prophet;
the lord, master and architect
to design the perfect happy home?
Who let you become the lexicographer
and redefine the term family
as being only a man and a woman and their children?

Marriage is a sacred vow,
to have and to hold, from this day forward,
for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer,
in sickness and health, until death do us part.
Do you think that just because
we are two men or two women
we are not just as capable of
this level of commitment?
can you not see that the term Life-Partner
is just a substitution for the words husband and wife?

Who are you to set the terms
of our pursuit of justice, happiness, and prosperity?
You say that our nature "offends" you,
that your God frowns upon homosexuality
I always thought that God was tolerant
that it was him who designed my heart and my soul
to love and cherish completely
blind to sex, blind to color,
So please new messiah, tell me your name.

Who are you?

 

You defame me and my family

call us heretics and blasphemers

that go against the "natural order" of things

When in actuality your "natural order"

has been the rule only since

your Christ died... your tolerant, patient, and loving Christ

The one who died for your sins of hypocrisy.

 

So please before you judge me and my family

see past the fact that we are not like you

that we found love in the arms

of another man or woman, look past that to see

the love that we share for eachother

the love we have for our kids

look past the obvious nature of us

and see that no matter the form

love is love, the same love you have

the same love that all of us desire to obtain.

Author notes

While I am not gay, I get sick and tired hearing all these "respectable" religious zealots going on and on about gay marriage. I have family members who are gay, both men and women. Guess what, they really are no different from you or I.

It really peeved me that last year, as we're chasing our tails around and around fighting a war that we have no chance of winning that Congress actually took the time to contemplate whether or not gay marriage should be legal. Question, with all the money that we pay your worthless, self-righteous selves in taxes every year, don't you think you could actually do something of importance, like figure out a way to keep 19 year old boys from coming home in body bags? Start worrying about things which involve your position in the Government, STOP TELLING PEOPLE HOW TO LIVE THEIR LIVES ACCORDING TO YOUR OWN DESIGN!!!!

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    February 1, 2007

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    awesome

    This was an awesome write. I totally agree, though I am straight as well (and married). I have gay friends who are the most loyal, respectable people I know. I have a serious issue with organized religions and governments that think they have a right to tell other people how they should love, how they should live, and even worse - to condemn others.
    Whatever happened to thou shalt not judge? They contradict themselves.
    You are an excellent writer who sheds light on problems within our society.
    Keep up the good work.


  • soulfultia gold member
    January 26, 2007

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    Intriguing

    You wrote a thought provoking piece, it started out with a bang, the definition of Family;....., I thought awesome start. Then it jumps of track a bit for me, seems to leap out at someone with harsh tones vs. an expression of viewpoints. Your Message is in there, but instead of "making your case", you are on the attack from the beginning. I did read it, but I think if you go back through it and tone it down a bit, you will draw more positive feedback. With that said, I admitedly am an amateur poet by all means and the weight of my comments are of course only worth the cost of stroking the keys...ha! You were off to an awesome start, if you tone it down or revamp, send me a link to re-read ~Tia


  • Sacrificial Love
    January 25, 2007

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    STANDING OVATION....

    This is POWERFUL...REAL...AND RAW....

    I LOVE IT....

    You are such an incredibly talent...I hope you will come by and give me some raw critique on my work...I would value you input...


  • Whoochi gold member
    January 24, 2007
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    Powerful

    Powerful message you convey here through the use of your poetic style...Nice touch...and so true... To put it simply..we all put our panties on the same way...one leg at a time....nice going....should be in a newspaper...front page..preferraby...WTG!!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    January 24, 2007

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    You are so right, all of society tries to put their noses in things that don't affect them. Love is love, and if someone is blessed enough to find it, then good for them. It is not our place to say who it should be with. If we all spent the time and energy we wasted on judging and condemning, to do something meaningful like making the world a better place, then we wouldn't have all the crimes and hatred around us! Thanks for sharing. Jeannie

  • Freespirit8
    January 24, 2007
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    Way to GO!

    Powerful statement, but I wish for more poetic devices, more subtelty. I think people respond more favorable to gentle persuasion rather than in your face. But keep telling the world, you have me convinced.


  • thorlorn thanatos
    January 24, 2007

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    I love the way you have written this.
    It is indeed true.

    This is poetry meets conscience and I think it is a good mix.
    It is daring but worth reading... Congratulations


  • ricochet rabbit
    January 24, 2007

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    I'm very intrigued by how you poetified the dictionary. I wish more people had this imagination.

    L10-13 is very good, but I think L14 is a little heavy-handed. The rest of your poem doesn't let up, and I feel you could have been a little more subtle in your approach. Of course, that may have not been your intent, which is fair enough. However, it's not really an approach I prefer


  • trista gold member
    January 24, 2007

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    To be honest, I have mixed feelings about this piece, but not because I disagree with its message. I'm a Christian, and was raised to understand it is not my place to judge others, period. None of us are perfect, and gay bashing by those who have the "holier than thou" attitude is NOT Christian behavior in my opinion. Then again...bashing the "holier than thou" crowd isn't setting a good example, either.

    My main concern is that your poem has extremely angry undertones, which is perfectly understandable. But unfortunately if you are trying to convince or persuade those who don't agree with you to reconsider their position on the issue, a poem such as this probably won't do much good. Most likely, something like this just makes them angrier and justifies their "rightness" in their own minds. Persuasion takes logic and facts instead of high-emotional reactions. So, it really depends on what you want to accomplish with a poem of this nature.

    I do applaud your honesty and courage in tackling a subject that is so controversial. I'm sure you will receive a lot of support in your views, as well as a nasty IM or two.

    Best wishes,
    ~J.

  • atty-poet
    January 23, 2007

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    important message and well said in an interesting manner. Like the definition of "family" as an epigraph to this poem, which starts off very strong in the first two stanzas. but tends to bog down in the middle and just run a little too long. For example, lines 23 and 24 on the marriage vow get the point across, without the need for lines 25 and 26. Just think it could be tighter in places, less is usually more. Take out the extra "we" in line 57. otherwise, well said. Love does come in many forms, shapes, sizes, and God gave them all to us. Keep fighting the good fight.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 23, 2007

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    BRAVO

    I totally agree with you. Love is love, respect is respect. It doesnt choose gender, color or financial status. It is felt from the heart.
    I grew up in a home with a father and step-mother and hated my life. But we were considered the " all american family". Meanwhile the unhappiness I was experiencing in that family, caused me to get married young just to get out of the house...so a domino effect caused many bad choices in my life.
    I believe that if 2 people can maintain a home for themselves and their children that they are a family.
    The government wastes their time worried about what we should do...but meanwhile there are familes being destroyed with a war that was started because of a persons napolianic ego.
    Soulful Woman


  • kajib
    January 23, 2007
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    I’m on your side, who’s to say what can and can not fulfill each others lives?


  • January 23, 2007
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    awesom


  • rollingzen
    January 23, 2007
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    wow! a kindred spirit! please read my poem 'cruel sleep' on a similiar wave-length


  • Poetdontknowit
    January 23, 2007
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    ALL RIGHT!!!!!

    Wow. You would make one heck of a writer for a newspaper, or column. You tell it like it is, and I respect you for it. I truly enjoyed reading your piece of poetic pie! You go!!!!!!!!!
    POETDONTKNOWIT


  • WisdomWarrior
    January 23, 2007

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    Thank you for entering. You can fix as many errors as you like and make as many changes as you like until close of round on the 26th.

    I have read your piece but I won't judge it until after the 26th.

    John

    PS -
    While I respect your passion for the subject, I still need you to follow the rules of the contest and remove any vulgarity (swearing) from your entry - that includes the author notes.


  • TJCasser
    January 23, 2007

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    I like the message and how you carry it forth here in this piece (though I will confess it feels a bit too "prose-y" perhaps).

    I agree also with your basic idea here - it's shocking how, when the basic theme of the Old Testament is "love thy neighbor as thyself" that we find new ways to make exceptions to the rule. All of it just makes me ashamed sometimes to be part of this society...


  • LaMerci
    January 23, 2007
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    Provocative

    ...with a great line of questioning...and so many answers to. The questions for all of us or for any thinking person would be what is the truth and who is able to judge...or not. We all know one thing for sure no human can. Great piece of work as always Tat bebeh.

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    January 22, 2007

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    Tommy, you have my standing ovation on this write. Dear you are perfectly aware that I am a Christian and I have to say that I agree wholeheartedly with what you have said here. I too am sick of those who call themselves Christians running around telling folks they are going to be damned to hell for their sins...like they are sinless. Now I know that I am going to take some backlash for this comment and that's okay. But the Lord I worship is a non-prejudiced Lord. He doesn't stop loving us because we don't fit perfectly into His image of us. If that were the case then not one single human on this earth would ever see the day that they could see Jesus face to face on the throne in Heaven. I love how you wrote this and I commend you on taking such a determined stand, I think you will be surprised at just how many Christians will back you on this write. Those who live by the bible and not just scripture pluckers know that to gain the lost you must show love, not hate.

    I hope your doing well my friend and I hope your work schedule has eased up a bit...I still think you should let me stow away in one of those pieces of luggage when you get ready to take off...lmbo


  • HisBreathlessDream
    January 22, 2007

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    YEAH BABY!!!!!!!!

    I see you liked the linky wooohooo
    This is a potent and powerful piece. Things that need to be said. This is going to get multi-level feedback and I have to make my view straight.... ummm or not so straight.... slightly bent.... hehe...

    I am a christian woman... I raise my children with Christian beliefs.... I have a husband whom I love very much.... but I LIKE WOMEN!!! If it had ever come as far as it had with hubby, with a woman, I would like to hope that I would have the right to marry her legally.

    Family is not just a mom a dad and some kids. It is so much more than that. It is love and a sharing of emotions, ideas, responsibility. It is helping each other in all ways necessary.

    No one can tell me my God hates me for what I am. He made me.

  • HisBreathlessDream
    January 22, 2007

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    tommy you pulled a double negative you should take out one of the nots lol.

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