There are many things you do to me
Having every single emotion happen
I have been lifted just to be dropped
So many things I'm feeling through mood swings
Remembering how exhilerating love should be
Oh how I'm so dizzy at this particular moment
Letting me feel like I'm on top of this world
Letting me experience full circle the pain
Each emotion has been engraved in my mind
Richt now you have me confused and contemplating
Can't think straight and you'll still weave your magic
Oh to once again be on an even keel again
A reality that has been missing and is long gone
Something that in actuality will never see again
This has me confused and now I'm blinded here
Especially when you have me trapped in your lair
Right now All I can see and think of is you
Reeling and trying one last time to realize
I have to be myself and no longer can I pay this price
Don't keep me on a string and use me as a puppet
Especially when this rollercoaster ride here must end
A contest entry
- MOOD SWINGS by piccola.
450 points, ended January 27, 2007, 8 entries
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even keel
Even keel, where is that? Do you ahve a map of how to get there...loving this...thanks for sharing this....will remember the 3 rd to last line through the end...this applies....
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When love is new and fresh, the emotions can be so overwhelming like riding a rollercoaster. It is too much to stay on the rollercoaster feeling for too long. but once love stabilizes, hop on the rollercoaster once in a while, for some zing!
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I know these feelings well and you do well to express them as a rollercoaster ride..ups and downs. great.
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VERY GOOD
Truly a great master piece of changing emotions.Wanting to stay yet knowing you must go..
This is very touching to my heart...
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