A secluded clearing
An ancient chant
Skyclad dancers spin
Whispers of wind
Groans of earth
Trickles of water
Snaps of fire
Silence of Ęther
The circle has been cast
A people tied to the earth
A night of silent power
Woe be to those who use it for ill
For the fall under the threefold law
Three by three
They fall to a knee
Before the splendor of the goddess
A contest entry
- ~ Wicca~ What does it mean to you? by Amunet Wolfbane.
600 points, ended January 25, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WONDERFUL!! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!!! As long as you believe as you have written in this poem you will have a wonderful life. I sometimes more than others know of the threefold rule for I have done a few wrongs with my power. So thank you for this poem it has cleared my mind of any doubt. Again I say WONDERFUL!!
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Perfect
The perfect description. You have captured the essence of Wicca perfectly. Enrolling truth, tranquility, imagery, and even warning all into one poem takes talent. You did it well though. A job well done.
Nikido
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Nicely done. It lends a beautiful image and meaning to the reader here. There is a serentiy here. Lovely job.
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This was really beautiful, and pretty much covered the beauty of Wicca. I enjoyed this write, keep up the good work.
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