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A thief's conclusion

A thief,
tripping over his vapid taunts
showing a world of ethereal dismal

Askewing all that is good
his virtu is agog
to sire a genesis for plundering
crimping the allay;
to rapine a nexus dream

Trickling the coins he robbed,
entering a genesis
of a dramatic realm

A wag he'll need to be,
as what awaits for him is near

Author notes

This was a class assignment, and the words given to be put together in a poem sorta made me think of thieves -.- the last part of it u can say it's the callout for 'em

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  • Ryno
    January 29, 2007
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    Interesting

    I liked some parts, in was a very original piece. Thanks for entering.

  • Phed
    January 23, 2007

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    wow

    This is pretty impressive for a school wordbank assignment! i like it! well done hunny

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