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[ Wicca ]

Wicca

Calm, Serene
A blanket of peace
Strength to move on
A place to fall back
When things don't go your way
A ritual done everyday
Comforting breaths
Protection alone
My Life

Wicca

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Just kinda what I took it... Written shortly, basically it sucks so yeah...

I might want to improve on it.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 23, 2007

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    everyone has something that brings them that, well on a reilgous sense so to you i say keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 22, 2007
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    I like your piece. I don't care for the author's comments. I will be back to comment more at contest close. Please do not post negative comments about your own work. Especially in a contest (especially my contests). I'll be back. Thanks for entering.


    • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
      January 22, 2007
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      Thanks fine I'll be back at contest close. I don't mean to sound harsh


    • TripleGoddess
      January 22, 2007
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      I really think it needs a lot of work, so I'm going to work on it more. I just needed to get something down and remember where it went in one go.. Sorry.