Think you've drunk enough to drive,
You've had too many drinks.
You feel yourself begin to slide,
And you can't even think.
You're gonna end up in hospital,
A victim of the Crash.
You've known it since you were a little boy,
The slowly motioned smash.
~A play by play action relay,
You're watching yourself all the way,
You're falling from your own.
What will everybody say?
They've taken everything away,
They left you all alone.
Did you think you'd get out of this one?
You're slowly losing your mind.
You never were the perfect song...
So you left it all behind.
~A play by play action relay,
You're watching yourself all the way,
You're falling from your own.
What will everybody say?
They've taken everything away,
They left you all alone.
Is there anything I can improve?
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This is really good. It's very intense and powerful and I get really angry when no one replies to these sorts of poems. I know coz no one does to me either. They deserve recognition so I am giving you it!
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