Please don't cry,
please don't weep,
'cause when you do,
my heart leaps.
Chorus:
'Cause as your friend,
as your pal,
I just want you to know...
that when you cry,
I cry,
and when you hurt,
my heart breaks.
I love you beautiful,
don't you know?
And I hate it,
hate it when you're low.
I love that you trust me,
I love that I can help,
but sometimes I wish
you could help yourself.
Chorus.
I hate it when you're angry,
I despise it when you're mad,
but I find however,
that I love it when you're glad.
When someone has wronged you,
when troubles come your way,
I never wanna let you go,
I just wanna say:
Chorus.
When you worry,
when life has got you down,
I can't smile,
I can only frown.
You're so precious,
and I hold you in my heart,
and even though we are,
I wish we weren't apart.
Chorus two times.
Author notes
I don't think I write very good songs. I think it would help if I could sing, or knew music or something...Anyways I wrote this for my beautiful friend Julie. =D.
Dear Katie,
WHO ARE YOU!?
-Me
A contest entry
- MUAHAHAHA!! A Contest for ~*MUAH*~ by as.phy.xi.ate..
450 points, ended May 10, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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I like this piece, it is nice, I think your other work is better but if read like a poem then your verses have strong meaning and a solidity to them.
~Katie -
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Yeah this is not one of my best. But I included it because it had emotion when I wrote it. =P. This is why I'm glad I could enter more than one. =D
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