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Amera’s Muse

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Amera’s Muse

Sing tales of my muse and what she did to me
Sing tails of my muse and how she set me free
Like a raging fire that burned the city down
She swept my soul and draped it like a gown

She has taken my mind and turned it inside out
Not on my own and that I have no doubt
From out of no were this entity came
If I listen to myself, will I still be sane?

Take an empty mind and fill it with this word
Without my muse the meaning would be blurred
Is she a curse or an answer to prayer?
For no reason at all, I am made aware

So sing tales of my muse and how she took my soul
And sing tales of my muse and how she took control
So I submit to my muse and she comforts me
She gives me these blessings as you can see

 

 

 

 

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  • Ladybug
    January 27, 2007

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    submission is the key when writing with the muse at hand,
    so you show us here in a elegant style of penmanship

    thanks for your courage and entry

    Tamara


  • Manoura xx
    January 23, 2007

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    wooow...i loved this...it was soo cool..i donno how i thought of this..but it seems soo much differnt from allthe other poems that you have written {and you have written a lot...haha} it lyk just stands out...with a shining lyt...you deserve all 700 points in this contest...and there are many other great poets in this contest...but i see that you have really really really, done a greaaaat job here... {okay...this may sound wierd at the moment..but what's a muse???haha}

    OKAY!!!um...BYE!@!!!!!!!!!!!!11


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    January 23, 2007

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    Very nice. So purely the poet's way, we who live in the grip of vivid vision feel the "feel" so much that it takes a persona on. Thus we name it muse, all the while knowing it is me...or in this instance...you!
    Well Done!
    xxoo
    dk


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 23, 2007

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    Awe the power of a muse. What a beautiful write about someone who inspires so much. Lovely form and flow. Very nicely done with such beauty. We are all not so blessed with a muse so great, but when we are we hold on, for it may be for moments, days or months. Yet it is for a reason short or long.
    Wonderful sweet, stanza three is my favorite, for it is a truth we often wonder a curse or a blessing.
    Best to you!


  • Fire N Ice
    January 23, 2007
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    WOW!!!

    This is beautiful,
    IT NEEDS MUSIC lol, you have such amazing talent,
    im truly in awe!!


  • Tam
    January 22, 2007

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    Ohhh...how lovely this is!

    Very well done...
    Clearly you Muse is one amazing lady to inspire your pen to such a wonderful write...
    You are very blessed!
    Have a happy night! Tammy


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 22, 2007

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    Thought this was a great poem - easy to read and understand with good rhythm and rhyme and flow throughout. One never knows where our muse will take us - even we are very surprised sometimes with the results of her labors!


  • agazeley gold member
    January 22, 2007

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    I enjoyed it . . but


    I think it was a bit repetitive - for want of a better word . . loved the layout and the graphic . . good luck with the contest –

    Albert


    • Amera gold member
      January 22, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment. I understand were you're comming from. It is actually ment to be sung.


  • January 22, 2007

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    Wonderful!

    So sublime and elegant this words… Well done, you take the reader on a journey into the world of bliss!


  • PerVirtuous
    January 22, 2007
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    Wow. That sure stirs up feelings.

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