Faces painted
thick with sin
starving in a game
they cannot win
picture perfect
flawless lies
cheap perfume
and bloodshot eyes
coma white
with sex that sells
fifty bucks
and cheap motels
Hollywood perfection
a plastic hypocrisy
movie stars
and timeless obscenity
rehab stints
from powder white
mindless barbies
lost the fight
A contest entry
- Glitter Queens & Nicoteen by E t e r n i t y.
650 points, ended March 5, 2007, 28 entries
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I love this niccy....You rhymed! You never write rhyming poetry, but you did in this one! And you did a great job....you are such an awesome writer<33333333
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I loved it!! To me it says this is our America....Welcome.lol keep it up
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thats reallly goood like really good i dont know what it is i think its it rythm and the use of words but its just really good ten out of ten x
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i love the simplicity of this.
it's dirty pretty...
but so simple..
&& i love it.
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