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A Broken Heart

Just the sight
Of your face
The one I used to love
Hearing your voice
The one that calmed me
So many times before
A small thought
Will bring me to tears
A broken heart will never mend

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Kinda sucky, but that's how I'm feeling right now.

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  • Time focus on Me
    January 29, 2007
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    Great

    sad poem but full of emotions and heart into it. I know how ya feel I been like this sense my guyfriend has went away from me once again. still strange to me but enways U did a alsome job and loved it. keep da ink flowing cause ya work is gorgeous ttyl


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 23, 2007

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    it is not sucky, but is it sad, i think you are wrong about one thing thou, a broken heart will mend, it is just up to it's owner when it will. keep it flowing


  • Elvenfairy
    January 22, 2007

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    aww! (curls up in your lap so you can get comfort) this poem is so sad! I have never actually had a broken heart, I got fed up with my BF even before he dumped me, but I am sorry if you had your heart broken. (rubs nose against your cheek, tries to comfort you) even if this isn't true it is sad.