I fight against the tide
To keep myself adrift
The ocean is different than the sea
The home I surely miss
I know not where I'm going
Or even if I'll get there
But this feeling consumes me
To belong somewhere
Battling against the blade
Trying to face the scars
Struggling to keep my dreams
And my eyes toward the stars
Starting to lose myself
And everything I want to be
Trying so hard to get back home
And trying not to lose me
03-24-2006
Author notes
This was written last March when I moved from Idaho to Washington. I'm feeling this way a bit more often, now...
Please tell me what you think
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Whoa such emotion that even I am baffled...Im sorry you are feeling this way and well thats all I can pretty much do to help you...sometimes i wish I could do so much more for everybody that I know and care about and especially if they're going through hard times..its pisses me off sometimes..But damn girl nice writing and very poetically tragic.
-Acronym/Chris
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wow
this is really good it shows you and your feelings and true feelings real stuff reall problems. stuff that you can imagine youself doing and no matter how many different time you write about it you still see every pooint clearly. most people find it hard to write about the truth. your a natural keep it up.
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This is so full of emotion! Great writing.
I only hope yuo know that I love yuo no matter what! I can't wait to see you again! I've been missing you day by day.
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I know things are hard now but they'll get better soon. Your family can't expect you to stay there forever... *huggles* And if worse comes to worse, I will come and steal you!
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Or I could come and steal you after securing an apartment
That'd get ya out of Idaho
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